Online Dating and LinkedIn Profile Writing Advice

I regularly critique excerpts from random dating and LinkedIn profiles (for anonymity). By pointing out dos and don'ts from actual profiles, you too can look at your own with a critical eye and improve on your personal branding.


From online to the altar. The wedding’s on!

As an online dating profile writer, as well as a seasoned ad writer,  I know that a great online dating presentation is importance. Want to increase your chances of finding your soulmate online?  Then make your online dating photos and your online dating “about me” spectacular. Will it work? It could. Here’s the story of one person who found love and marriage online. Yet another guest blog by CB. This one describes the events leading up to the wedding. Tomorrow,… read more

The true story of internet romance.

As an ad writer and online dating profile writer, I know the importance of a great online dating presentation. If you want to increase your chances of finding your soulmate online then I encourage you to make your online dating photos and your online dating “about me” spectacular. Will it work? It could. After all, others have found success. In fact, a few months ago, I had a guest blogger known as CB. She told the story of her internet… read more

Writing your online dating profile, tips for California singles.

Every week I scan dating profiles from all over the States. I then pick arbitrary excerpts from three, which I critique based on my years as an ad writer and marketing expert – skills that I’ve since transferred to writing online dating profiles. Feel free to check out my bio. The critiques are meant to help you too by providing tips to improve your own online dating profile. This week, my focus has been on the dating profiles of singles… read more

Improve your online dating profile. Tips for California singles.

This is the second blog to feature an excerpt from the dating profile of a single online dating in California. I pick the dating profiles arbitrarily and change them slightly to keep the anonymity of the writer. I then critique an excerpt based on my years as an ad writer and marketing expert – skills that I’ve since transferred to writing online dating profiles. Feel free to check out my bio and online dating samples of my work. Even though… read more

Ann Coulter has nice hair and how that can improve your online dating profile.

A little while ago, Anne Coulter not only used the word “retard”, she actually criticized the word police for creating a stir over it. When her venom became news, as it usually does, my personal Facebook page filled with long threads of contempt her. At one point, I wrote, “She has nice hair”. I was being facetious, of course. I couldn’t care less about her hair. In truth, I think she’s sociopathic, white collar trash who uses her significant intelligence… read more

How to write a better online dating profile. LA Singles Edition.

Thus far this week, I’ve posted two excerpts from online dating profiles that I’ve read on dating sites catering to LA singles. I’ve then critiqued the excerpts and offered profile writing tips based on my experience as an ad writer and marketing expert (you can check out my bio here). This third excerpt is the last one from LA. Next week, I’ll move on to California in general then I’ll expand to each State. In the meantime, I hope the… read more

How to write your online dating profile -profile writing tips for Los Angeles singles.

This week, I’ve been scanning random dating profiles written by LA singles. Thus far, I’ve written one blog post where I shared an excerpt from one of the dating profiles. I then provided a critique with profile writing tips based on my expertise in ad writing and marketing (check out my bio). Today’s blog features this excerpt from a single woman in her 40’s followed by my critique. Tomorrow, I’ll post another blog about singles in LA and then I’ll move… read more

Online dating profile writing tips for Los Angeles singles.

I decided to scan some arbitrary dating profiles in the Los Angeles area this week. Over the next few days I’ll post excerpts from some of them and then critique them while providing profile writing tips based on my expertise in ad writing and marketing (check out my bio). Here’s the first excerpt from a man in his 40’s followed by my critique: If you can’t make time to meet after emailing/texting for a week…then you’re not the girl for… read more

Dating profiles and silent nights.

I once went on a blind date with a man who I was told would be perfect for me.  According to friends, he was handsome, intelligent and sociable. We even shared several interests from advertising to art. I met said handsome, intelligent, sociable and perfect man in a bar. We greeted each other with big smiles then made small talk that never, and I mean, never went anywhere. We spent most of the night grappling for conversation. In truth, he… read more

Online dating profile writing tips for New York singles.

This week, I’ve looked at a number of dating profiles written by single men and women who are online dating in New York. Thus far, I’ve written two blogs where, based on my marketing expertise, I critique an excerpt from an arbitrary dating profile (though I do change it slightly for the sake of anonymity). This is an excerpt from the dating profile of a single woman in her late 30’s: LIVE LIFE LOVE Hmmmm…..I’m fun love to laugh ..… read more