Examples of online dating profiles inspired by NYC singles.

As an ad writer and online dating profile writer, I’m in the unique position to offer marketing tips on how to improve your online dating profile.

Please feel free to check out my bio, as well as the online dating profile samples of my work.

For this post, I’ve chosen to critique the online dating profile of single 39-year old male in NYC. I chose the dating profile arbitrarily and I’m only featuring an expert to maintain his anonymity.

Single 39 year old guy who is sick to death of games. Looking for an interesting funny woman.  I just updated this and they’ve increased the amount of text required this time…damn.

My critique

Wow, upbeat. Somehow I doubt that a funny woman would find this concise, negative online dating profile especially engaging. Besides everything – another thing that’s wrong with this negative and incomplete profile is the that he says he’s a 39 year old male. The settings would say your age and your photo would clearly demonstrate you’re male. No need to waste space on redundant points.

On a final note

To ensure that your online dating profile writing is as persuasive and engaging as possible, go straight to the online personality quiz then submit the answers to me. You’ll be amazed at what I can do with them!