Today I’m featuring the online dating profiles of a man and a woman.
Both have made a profile writing mistake that I’ve mentioned in previous posts. I’m addressing it again because I see it frequently.
I’m always available for consultations, which is a cost-effective way to get real value. but, if you can’t hire me to help you write your dating profile then, hopefully by showing examples of mistakes, you can avoid making them yourself.
From the dating profile of a 56-year old man.
I’m a typical man’s man. I like hot rods, motorcycles, and fishing lol. I do like to see a good action movie on the big screen! I absolutely love Rock and Roll. Just not the same anymore. Bring back Foreigner lol!
From the dating profile of a 48-year old woman.
I like frilly dresses, high heels and nice dinners out. For me the best holiday is at the spa, if I could I’d get a manicure every day, I would lol. I swear I have more nail polish on my shelves then I do food, lol.
My critique.
It’s very important to make your interests and lifestyle clear on your dating profile because, after all, the point is to meet someone who’s compatible. Nevertheless, you need to consider who you’re addressing. If you want a partner make sure you give indications of how they’ll fit in to your day to day.
For instance, don’t just go on about hotrods and action flicks, add something that shows you can be a great friend to a woman too.
As for women, celebrating your femininity is lovely. It’s even attractive to men. However, a profile about manicures and nail polish needs to have some balance that shows there’s room in your life for activities that men would enjoy sharing with you.
In short, be true to yourself but add elements that show you’ve considered the audience.
And one more thing – it’s “than” not “then” ….drives me nuts.
Why hire a dating profile writer?
Writing a dating profile properly is actually more difficult than people realize. There are a number of things to take into consideration even beyond the difficulty of talking about yourself.
So, take the pressure off and promote yourself in the most engaging way by hiring me to craft your dating profile on your behalf. I keep it true to you by asking questions that allow me to use your words and stories. In addition, because of my background as an ad writer, I know that marketing techniques to make it truly appealing. It’s what I’m trained to do.
Check out the online dating samples and see for yourself. Or, get started on uncovering some of your unique traits by completing the personality questionnaire and sending your answers to me. You’ll be amazed at what I can do.
