Sometimes the best way to learn something is by seeing it in practice. As such, I hope the following online dating profile tips will help you. I’ve chosen two excerpts from online dating profiles that I found on two popular dating sites, and I’ve provided a critique of each one.
As an ad writer and marketing expert, I’m trained to make you stand out on everything from dating profiles to LinkedIn profiles and professional bios. For those who don’t or can’t use my services, I hope this blog helps you do it yourself. Some posts are about a particular aspect of online dating. Others, like this one, provide tips based on actual dating profiles that I’ve come across.
How to write an online dating profile, tip 22.
Caring,fun loving,affectionate,romantic,genuine,grounded, non judgemental…. looking for the same, love my kids, music, romance, the ocean, downtown,concerts,hockey,football. golf, fitness, tennis,skiing,a pub lunch,a night at home with someone special, lots and lots more..musical interests include stevie ray vaughn,pearl jam, clapton, stones, zeppelin, the beatles music is a huge part of who i am… would love to hear from you.
This profile is not at all compelling. From a list of adjectives to a catalogue of interests – it reads more like a thesaurus than a personal summary. It lacks personality. Rather than do a point form of what you enjoy, demonstrate your personal qualities and get across your activities through anecdotes. They bring your profile – and you – to life in the most unique way possible. Stories are engaging. Lists are not.
How to write an online dating profile, tip 23.
Well they say the 3rd time is the charm….so let’s hope it works this time!! I have been on here two times before. The first was with no success and the second well I thought I met Mr. Right but I guess was not right for him. And I move on…..lol!!!!! I enjoy the beach, lake, or hanging by the pool! I enjoy sports watching and playing. I am laid back. I can dress up or down depending on the occasion. I can go out on the town, or just chill. Family is very important and I spend a lot of time with mine. If there is anything you would like to know please ask!!
Way to start a profile! She sounds like the girl nobody wants. Success begets success so please don’t start a profile about your romantic failures. Also “I move on…lol” – how is that laugh out loud funny? From there, she too goes into a list of activities rather than really bringing out her personality. Again, use anecdotes. Give readers a story. Give them a glimpse of a “day in the life” of being with you from your interests to your charming quirks.
For more help with your online dating profile, start by uncovering a few of your unique traits complete the personality quiz. It costs nothing to do, but it’s an important first step in writing the kind of profile that stands out. Once you’ve completed the quiz, select some of the most interesting answers and incorporate into your dating profile. Better still, hire me to do it. I’m trained to know what to pick and where to put it.
Feel free to check out the online dating samples of my work, as well. I also use my ad writing and marketing techniques to craft dynamic LinkedIn profiles and professional bios.
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