All posts tagged with Los Angeles singles

Thus far this week, I’ve posted two excerpts from online dating profiles that I’ve read on dating sites catering to LA singles. I’ve then critiqued the excerpts and offered profile writing tips based on my experience as an ad writer and marketing expert (you can check out my bio here). This third excerpt is the last one from LA. Next week, I’ll move on to California in general then I’ll expand to each State. In the meantime, I hope the… read more →

I decided to scan some arbitrary dating profiles in the Los Angeles area this week. Over the next few days I’ll post excerpts from some of them and then critique them while providing profile writing tips based on my expertise in ad writing and marketing (check out my bio). Here’s the first excerpt from a man in his 40’s followed by my critique: If you can’t make time to meet after emailing/texting for a week…then you’re not the girl for… read more →